Fiction-Drama
He couldn’t contain himself; he walked from aft to stern again and again inside his dark cabin. Then, he sat in front of his old folding table. He just stood there for a while, gazing at the nice kindled lamp as the fire danced once more for him. He just wondered in thoughts, and as a revelation ended up thinking he was some kind of mythological being.
His
reality came back again as he made eye contact with his hangued uniform, his belt, his
hat and the batch attached to it.
Just to
think he would wear those to the grand opening of his neighborhood park. Now,
that was something that got him back in to a bright-spirited state. It was his
park, his loyal arena for the past year. Then his eyes went back again to
the small bit of fire. “They make everything so difficult, now everyone is just
fighting. But I will be surveying them; no one doing bad deeds will prevail in
this park. I’m going to get there early. I will then go near the children’s
play-box, then near the birthday gazebo. No one, no one will escape me, it is
my park grand re-opening. The villains will flee; this is the piece I will
carry tomorrow. Those crime lovers will know much better. Now let’s get to
sleep”
But it wasn’t
like that… Half an hour later he was still awaken. Awaken and sitting outside
the aft, swinging his legs in the air as he sat on top of the ice box, until the
sun came out. He stared at a sea gull all night, a bird that was just afraid to
get near him but friendly enough to keep his company all thru the night. Once
and once again he tried to feed her some bread, without any luck. Just to get a
chance to feel her white and soft feathers was all he was looking for.
The color
of the ocean looked like mild tea, mixed with water, he also stared at it.
In front
of him, right at the dock, was the live-bait store. Was the size of
a two story train station. She had just a few air-vents at the top of her barn
looking roof level. All of the bait shop was covered with rotten zinc
panels the color of red fire ants. Some of them new, some of them were planks
made out of old wood. It had a huge water-tank that seemed to him like a giant.
Sometimes he looked at it as if it was a gushing oli-rigg that had just truck gold.
But it was really a rusty structure covered in rotten metal, drenched by lead
and bluish huge stains. He also stared at that that insomniac morning. He
stared at the light sign that blinked from it's side beam and said live-bait.
Someone
had the courage to line up hundreds of empty beer bottles, all transparent, all
around this place. Who had the courage to build this? Who had the stamina to
build a cement arch, incrusted with hundreds of pieces of colored glass? With
all kinds of bottles and mosaics that resembled weird looking faces. It just
gave you the feeling this place belonged to some kind of cult and rather less to
the fisherman kind. He also reflected on that.
The sound
of that days morning tow-boat air horn, reminded him again that time was moving on. He balanced
back to the cabin that gave him shelter, and before steping down, he spotted something in the waters.
“Nicole!”
he shouted at an old lady who swam with her hat across the mild colored waters.
“I will be at the park today, bring Nicolay, you can be sure I will be looking
around for your safety.” But the lady continued her swimming, more less did she
notice that from that old boat, a man dressed in uniform pretended to get her
attention.
It
already seemed to him that someone was in the need of his service. He went back
to his plan. He also thought that this was the best day that the year could bring.
He also thought that after all of that year had passed, after all of those vigilant days
at his old park, that those visitors at the opening ceremony, would reward him with a warm baked chicken
pot pie. “By now they should be baking
that delicious pie. It may have my name written on top, or maybe my batch number
carved on top of its delicious crusty cover.”
At 1:00PM,
as always, as he did for so many months, he strolled near the play-yard area.
The few parents there, didn’t care a blimp about him, no one looked at him as
he passed along. With the exemption of a weird, tall looking man who was hiding
at the back of some wild branches. Who
saw him from afar and jumped like a cricket out of his hiding place.
As he passed near the birthday gazebo…, the same thing. Not one friendly salute for him, not one welcoming gesture, not one cup of water for the security hero. Yet, some weird looking couple who planned to rob most of the moms purses, walked away when they saw the hunched figure for as far away as the parking lot.
As he passed near the birthday gazebo…, the same thing. Not one friendly salute for him, not one welcoming gesture, not one cup of water for the security hero. Yet, some weird looking couple who planned to rob most of the moms purses, walked away when they saw the hunched figure for as far away as the parking lot.
Their
fertile ground for fraudulent acquisitions was no longuer available for their
team.
He
wandered all around the parks gazebos and picnic tables, till dawn... Not knowing by then, than more than ten
criminals had scrammed out the premises due to his presence. The parks inaugural
ceremony was also over. “I will trap them all, leave them to me. Can’t even get
the blues…what am I going to do…,” he said as he walked, he swung his black
stick.
He had a wondrous
stride. His piece, his hat, his cuffs, they all dwelled as a part of him, just
as the park dwelled as part of his heart.
He made
it back to the bait-shop on his way home. At the entrance, he looked from side
to side, and cleaned his sweat. The sweat that poured out of him just like
coins pour out of a casino slot machine that had struck the jack-pot.
As always
the enormous bite-shop had only two racks with only a dozen of rubber baits available.
The show room was all empty; the kitchen was as lonely as a desert. And only an
old sandwich toaster stood on top of its cutting board. “I have gone around for a
long time today; I’ve seen all sorts of villains today”
“Yes,
Yes, I know…” answered the owner, who stood there eating pretzels and going over
the Nascar race and the PGA golf tournament. Once and once again he pressed last- channel at the
control and sipped his beer. “Take some of those coffee cakes before they
rotten, take them for free,” he suggested him.
And him,
he took them, and saluted the owner holding on to his hat. “Thanks,” he
replied.
On the way to the dock, he passed under the modern art , glass incrusted cement arch. “Hey, no one has taken care of that park like me today,” he said gazing at a weird looking mosaic that resembled an old indian chief. Then he untied his small wooden rib, and feeling peace with himself, made his way to his old abandoned fishing-boat. He entered his under level cave, and as he stepped down the wooden stairs, he started to get rid of his plastic toy gun, his hat with replica plastic badge, and his light gray plastic toy cuffs. And stood in front of a long polished mirror and said to himself.
On the way to the dock, he passed under the modern art , glass incrusted cement arch. “Hey, no one has taken care of that park like me today,” he said gazing at a weird looking mosaic that resembled an old indian chief. Then he untied his small wooden rib, and feeling peace with himself, made his way to his old abandoned fishing-boat. He entered his under level cave, and as he stepped down the wooden stairs, he started to get rid of his plastic toy gun, his hat with replica plastic badge, and his light gray plastic toy cuffs. And stood in front of a long polished mirror and said to himself.
“No one, not
one of them will get out of my reach, I will get them all!”
This is
one example of those characters that I rather get rid off in a short story before
they become attached to me, my blog is full of them. Most of the time they
become very short stories. This took me five days before I saw the painting
at the Kissimmee's Flea Market. "Hey, I found you a home character," I thought.
Then I went to Space-Bar, in D.T. Orlando for the scene-scheme over
a Brook Beer. Downloaded the story on paper while visiting Down Town Disney next
day, were I celebrated the outcome with a hot churro, yes! Down Town Disney gets your creations flowing,
good place full of sets. Hope you liked HIM!
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